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	<title>Comments on: Wed. April 11, 2012:  Revisions and Writing</title>
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		<title>By: devonellington</title>
		<link>http://devonellington.wordpress.com/2012/04/11/wed-april-11-2012-revisions-and-writing/#comment-24694</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 12 Apr 2012 11:21:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yeah, when someone hates a prologue JUST because it&#039;s marked &quot;Prologue&quot; -- doesn&#039;t really make sense to me.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, when someone hates a prologue JUST because it&#8217;s marked &#8220;Prologue&#8221; &#8212; doesn&#8217;t really make sense to me.</p>
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		<title>By: Chad Aaron Sayban</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Chad Aaron Sayban]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Apr 2012 19:49:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I agree about the use of prologues in certain cases.  I think they can really set up a story and get the reader hooked if used properly.  I am actually using one in my Sci-Fi manuscript, but not in my Thriller.  The Sci-Fi story needs a kickoff that is quite a ways away in time from the main story, so that separation really works.  With the Thriller, it doesn’t really require it so I didn’t use one.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree about the use of prologues in certain cases.  I think they can really set up a story and get the reader hooked if used properly.  I am actually using one in my Sci-Fi manuscript, but not in my Thriller.  The Sci-Fi story needs a kickoff that is quite a ways away in time from the main story, so that separation really works.  With the Thriller, it doesn’t really require it so I didn’t use one.</p>
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		<title>By: bookmom</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Apr 2012 19:19:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[It&#039;s been a crazy week here, too. I am hoping for both our sakes it calms down soon! Blessings!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s been a crazy week here, too. I am hoping for both our sakes it calms down soon! Blessings!</p>
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		<title>By: devonellington</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Apr 2012 17:19:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Oh, that sounds great!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, that sounds great!</p>
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		<title>By: Lori</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Apr 2012 13:20:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Funny how the smallest things can trigger a story. I was looking at the family tree on Ancestry and realized that not only was my grandmother a &quot;runner&quot; but her mother may have been, as well. No record of her buried anywhere near her family, so it&#039;s possible grandma got her &quot;wandering&quot; gene from her mother. 

What a great story idea, huh?]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Funny how the smallest things can trigger a story. I was looking at the family tree on Ancestry and realized that not only was my grandmother a &#8220;runner&#8221; but her mother may have been, as well. No record of her buried anywhere near her family, so it&#8217;s possible grandma got her &#8220;wandering&#8221; gene from her mother. </p>
<p>What a great story idea, huh?</p>
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